okay so this is the new. i try working the shell in but i was not feeling it so i am going to change the style and do something different, so far i like how it looks.
1. I like the old head armor better. The swirls were more organic and reminded me of some indian / aboriginal culture. Very stylized. This new design is more random and less appealing.
2. The straps are a cool idea but need to be thicker and maybe not hug the body so perfectly. I realize you used extract but change the thickness before extracting.
3. The legs and feet need a little more work in terms of modeling. I am not sure what you are using for ref but you may want to vary the thickness - depending on what kind of beast you are emulating.
4. Add more antennae or embellish the ones you have. The antennae are a nice touch but still need work.
Think about the story behind the beast. What is the origin of the creature? How was it made? What is its purpose? etc.
okay so this is the new. i try working the shell in but i was not feeling it so i am going to change the style and do something different, so far i like how it looks.
Looks good but here are my critiques so far:
ReplyDelete1. I like the old head armor better. The swirls were more organic and reminded me of some indian / aboriginal culture. Very stylized. This new design is more random and less appealing.
2. The straps are a cool idea but need to be thicker and maybe not hug the body so perfectly. I realize you used extract but change the thickness before extracting.
3. The legs and feet need a little more work in terms of modeling. I am not sure what you are using for ref but you may want to vary the thickness - depending on what kind of beast you are emulating.
4. Add more antennae or embellish the ones you have. The antennae are a nice touch but still need work.
Think about the story behind the beast. What is the origin of the creature? How was it made? What is its purpose? etc.
12$ isn't bad.
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